Thursday, January 24, 2008

My First Snow

It was my first winter
in this foreign land.
I felt like an uprooted tree
into the snow from the sand. (am from Rajasthan)

The night fell early,
the trees were all bare.
It looked as if the end was coming,
no more did God care

Then came the first snow,
Softly…silently…very white.
It settled on the road, on the grass,
nestling in the arms of the trees it sighed.

The world looked totally different,
a quiet magic filled the air.
It looked peaceful and serene
a white blanket everywhere.

I felt strange, almost exhilarated;
All the bare branches and getting dark at three
was just God prepping the world
before He got into his winter spree

8 Comments:

At 5:49 AM, Blogger NonsSens said...

As I 'd mentioned in Klash...I just loved this potrayal of winter........winter often connotes lonliness - and you brought that out well in the initial paras - the fear, the lonliness of the foreign land & of a foreign phenomenon. But then the soft, white, pristine snow changed it all.
So tell me do you enjoy snowfalls now, that you've been there 4 a while?

 
At 5:54 AM, Blogger NonsSens said...

As I'd mentioned in Klash, I just loved this potrayal of winter. Winter is often equated with lonliness - and u brought that out pretty well in the first few paras.....the lonliness in a strange land & the strangeness of a new phenomenon.
But then the soft, white, pristine snow changed it all........very well blended.
From lonliness to exhilaration. Well crafted.
So have u got used to snowfalls now that you've been there for a while?

 
At 5:54 AM, Blogger NonsSens said...

As I'd mentioned in Klash, I just loved this potrayal of winter. Winter is often equated with lonliness - and u brought that out pretty well in the first few paras.....the lonliness in a strange land & the strangeness of a new phenomenon.
But then the soft, white, pristine snow changed it all........very well blended.
From lonliness to exhilaration. Well crafted.
So have u got used to snowfalls now that you've been there for a while?

 
At 1:49 PM, Blogger Schuan said...

you are true....i felt the same....how do you feel now??? is it fine??? when i winded up on the campus, it was a snow storm.... i was alone wondering where to go....i spent the whole night outside the dorm....i want to go back home....i miss my mom...

 
At 3:07 PM, Blogger manya said...

i can almost feel the white snow and the bare trees!
I have also added your blog to my list of blogs that i follow. Hope to see more blogs from you.

 
At 8:00 AM, Blogger Rekha Kakkar said...

You write so well keep on updating the blog ...

 
At 2:51 PM, Anonymous Latha said...

Dear Richa
Very lovely poem. Almost makes me miss the cold..br..winters in Michigan. your poem nicely portrays the lovely, magical white snow

 
At 7:09 AM, Blogger Amit Charles said...

good one

liked the imagery :)

And the end was just perfect.

keep it goin;)

 

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