Coz You Are There For Me
The little everyday nothings that mean so much
“What did you cook…What did you eat”?
Letting the voice wash over you
As the hearts beat
The night draws on, and as the heartbeats mingle
The woes and the pains melt away
Goodnights said across the wire
Till the next day….
posted by richa @ 10:39 PM
6 comments
6 Comments:
Lovely poem. It's amazing how real the long distance relationships feel these days. Very beautifuly worded. It has a very nice, happy feel about it, which lingers after the end. :-)
Bachpan main ek kavita padhi thi, which said a pen can be mightier than even a sword....
While that is debated, one thing that this poem establishes is that a beautifully worded poem can make just about any feeling come alive, and give it a happy twist, much more powerful than the actors playing their part can ever show or feel.
The mystery of the long distance is maintained tastefully until the very end, and every word from the work can launch the reader into a realm of sweet and sour thoughts of his/her own realtionship, long distance or not..
I love this...and i get it...me n him were 2 yrs apart then 3 yrs together n now again apart since a yr. its tuf but ... theres a certsin charm to a long distance relationship. it feels like...if we can survive this probably we can survive all else :-)
"I'll be there for you..'cause you are there for me". This is the most valuable thing in this life, to have the loved ones near you..
sweet :)
long distances can be cut short with words :)
How true.
keep it goin;)
Thank you all for your comments
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